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Serperior waited in the the branches in an over hanging tree, trying to blend in with the greenery. She had been practicing this technique for weeks and finally she had perfected it now it was only a matter of time until an unsuspecting victim walked underneath. She hadn't eaten for days and was just waiting for the right moment.

You walked along the quiet path with the sun beaming down on your face. Suddenly the Serperior loosens its grip on the branches and drops swiftly onto your shoulders like a coil of rope loosely around your neck. Startled you fall to the ground and as the Serperior tightens its coils around your body. You start to struggle, not that it is of any use.

The Serperior is surprised he was just hoping to catch a Zigzagoon or something not a whole trainer. "But a meal is a meal" she thinks to her self. You wince as she slowly opens her gargantuan maw and unleashes wave after wave of hot, stale breath onto your face. The Serperior wastes no time in shifting your head neatly into her mouth. "No no no no Wait stop" you plead but the Serperior pays no attention to you.

Instead she tightens her coils around you and moves you forward, further into her mouth. Can feel her palatal valve against your face as you are forced into the pulsating throat. Every time you struggle the Serperior tightens her coils around your body, and eventually you decide that it is probably best to let her have her way with you. Upon realizing that you have given up the Serperior loosens her coils allowing you some room but not enough for you to escape. You can feel the powerfully rings of muscle gradually working your head deeper into the Pokemon's long body.

You were so distracted by the throat muscles contracting and relaxing that you did not realize that the  Serperior had used her tail to unbutton your shirt and remove your shoes. Then after relieving you of the rest of your clothes she concentrates entirely on swallowing you. As your shoulders pass though into her throat you can feel her tongue exploring your torso.

After getting bored of this the Serperior decides to pick up the pace and uses her coils again to force more of you in to her mouth. But once your waist was nearing the impressive entrance to the gullet the Serperior lets go completely and decides to let her hot slimy throat do the rest of the work. Her warm breath shelters your bare legs from the cold morning air and you can feel her close her mouth gently around your knee's. You realize that if she wanted to kill you she would've bitten you by now. But in the mind of a  Serperior there is no connection between swallowing something and killing it, in-fact she actually feels very affectionate towards you.

Now as the throat muscles push you deeper towards Serperior's stomach you can feel the last of your feet being pulled slowly into Serperior's mouth. The huge snake Pokemon now leans back and pauses to feel you slowly sliding down its slick body. Eventually you are squeezed in to a part of the snakes body that gives you some more room but it is also a lot hotter.

The Serperior smiles and gently rests its head on the bulge in its body feeling your squirming inside before slithering back to the base of a tree and beginning to climb up its branches. Then eventually feeling its meal settle a bit retires to its nest in the tree tops, happy and full.
Hi this is a Serperior vore request for :iconaleronssword:
Basically I don't know whether to call it willing or unwilling.

enjoy XD

Oh and yes due to popular demand the next one will be a
sequel to Arcanine vore
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nrpthegreat Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
"You were so distracted by the throat muscles contracting and relaxing that you did not realize that the Serperior had used her tail to unbutton your shirt and remove your shoes. Then after relieving you of the rest of your clothes she concentrates entirely on swallowing you." wait so the serperior took off ALL your clothes?!
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Hardcorev20 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
Basically the perstaits action of the esoghaus muscles was so soothing he didn't know that the snake had removed his closes.
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8thDimention Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD this is dirtier when your a girl.
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:iconthecrimsoncrafter:
TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
This isn't fatal, right? we hate fatal vore. we always release our prey afterwards. what happened to the trainer?
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:iconjimworld70:
Jimworld70 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
Im not sure a sword can Eat... Let alone be Sentient.... Unless its the Eyelander but MEH
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:iconthecrimsoncrafter:
TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
um... its a snake...
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:iconjimworld70:
Jimworld70 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
Itsajokeaboutyourprofilepicturebeingasword
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:iconthecrimsoncrafter:
TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Writer
oh.
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:iconjimworld70:
Jimworld70 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Yeah
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:iconfirefox626:
Firefox626 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student General Artist
That was a really funny argument XD
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:iconjimworld70:
Jimworld70 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
Thank you.
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deathbringer5454 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student Artist
I wish it was real
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Silverflamethepony Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Nice! :)
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RyuumaruOrochi Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
the trainer better live.........or else
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:iconthecrimsoncrafter:
TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
... or else I will take care of :iconpopgoesthebuizel:
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RyuumaruOrochi Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
;) (Wink) 
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:iconthecrimsoncrafter:
TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
sorry, who's Artemis threatening this time?
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:iconryuumaruorochi:
RyuumaruOrochi Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
awwwwwwwwwwwww.....wat?
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:iconthecrimsoncrafter:
TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
who has he been threatening?
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RyuumaruOrochi Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
idk
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8thDimention Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is awesome
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SnakesandDragons1355 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nice work^^
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miner109234 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
becouls it has nothing to do with...
war...
thunder...
:3
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miner109234 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
um...

VARY DRAMDIC...

if this was campain on war thunder it would be...
NOTHING! :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Gethome1st Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Does the trainer get to live
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DrFuturism Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Writer
When the trainer is getting eaten you said "palatal valve" only alligators and crocodiles have that. It's a fleshy valve that crocodilians have in the back of their throat to stop water from flowing in when they bite something underwater.
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SnakesandDragons1355 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
True
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MALTIAN Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Nice story but is the Serperior going to digest the trainer or keep him or her as a belly pet ?
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AmbipomNerd Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
What happens next?
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SerperiorCB Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That had so much detail, that I loved it, but it was kind of scary because of the detail, it was like I could feel it happening.
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Hardcorev20 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
you should do another Serperior Vore literature or art thing because I love it!
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Chaoni Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Me: Ok this just makes me nervous.*walks sits down and leans against the Serperior's tree*
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RescueScout Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
oh so much amazing detail in such a short text, wonderful, it's quick and potent.
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AndyTheShinyVictini Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
I just hope that serperior doesn't eat Nigel
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Hrotto Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That would be 'smashing'.
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serperiorlover Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
yea i found a mistake on here.The Serperior is surprised he was just hoping to catch a Zigzagoon or something not a whole trainer. "But a meal is a meal" she thinks to her self.You see it it says he first,then she.
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DrFuturism Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Writer
I found a misspell in the writing I don't know what to call it. He wrote "palatal valve" when the trainer is being eaten and only alligators and crocodiles have that. It's a fleshy valve that crocodilians have in the back of their throat to stop water from flowing in when they bite something underwater.
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Rymanfx99 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Willing or unwilling hmm I'd just say sudden
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PokemonVoreLover Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
you know, you explained so well that it would almost sound like what I would say if it was my point of view!
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PopGoesTheBuizel Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Writer
So I take it you are eaten a lot? XD
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:iconpokemonvorelover:
PokemonVoreLover Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
umm, yeah, was'nt that obvious before???
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:iconpopgoesthebuizel:
PopGoesTheBuizel Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Writer
Not really no, considering you didn't mention it at all for the duration of this conversation...
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JamesTheLitwik Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
Well done, well done indeed...
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ZachtheFloatzel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Professional Writer
I love this story geat job!
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:iconzilla93:
zilla93 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Serperior is a awesome pokemon.
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:iconshock1nglucario:
shock1nglucario Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
This is so awesome I had to read it again...can I get eaten next?
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neversurrender21 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh damn. where the fuck is my shotgun. wait simmons dont it wasnt the cue. ow damnit whyd you run me the fuck over with the warthog 'you gave the signal' thats only durring a fight.
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PopGoesTheBuizel Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Writer
*Steals Shot Gun And Runs You Over With Warthog Again*
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:iconhardcorev20:
Hardcorev20 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
I know that feeling when playing halo and being run over with a warthog drives me nuts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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neversurrender21 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
damn you simmions, washington get meta 'yes sir' now your fucked oh and some one help the one in the serperior stomach
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