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You watched as the Purugly stumbled a little before toppling onto its side and passing out next to the Skuntank. A fit of laughter erupted from next to you. "Wahahaha! I told you I had gotten stronger!" Barry blurted out gleefully. "Actually no" You interrupted "Your entire team were wiped out by Jupiter's Golbat. "Noooo" Whined Mars "How could this happen!?" "We trained so hard for this..." Groaned Jupiter.

"Anyway..." Continued Barry "I would finish you off, destroy the mountain, claim the red chain and control the universe but me and my Pokemon have come to the end of the line" Grinned Barry proudly, I'll leave you to clear up. The frilly headed boy healed your Pokemon and then darted off back town the mountain path. You were left gazing blankly at the two gloomy Galactic Commanders.

"Hey wait up!" Called another voice. A Blond haired woman in black clothing tore past Barry and made her way up to the temple. "Cynthia?" You exclaimed before she could reply the was another burst of laughter up at the alter where Cyrus was. "Fwahahahaha! You're too late Cynthia! I already have the red chain with me, why waste time battling you now when you can witness the creation of my new world my perfect, complete world! Dialga! Palkia! Come to me!"

The stone floor began shaking causing you and the two Commanders to hold onto the pillars with fear. Two large hovering crystals rose up from the ground either side of Cyrus. The two supporting Galactic grunts fled back down the path in terror. Cyrus backed down the steps a little and pulled a glowing red crystal chain with a shackle at each end out of his jacket. "Cyrus stop this madness!" Pleaded Cynthia.

The forms of two large dragon like silhouettes rose up from the ground in-front of the Crystals "Yes!" Cried Cyrus in-between burst of maniacal laughter. Suddenly the ceremony was interrupted by three orbs appearing above the two pokemon and circling around the alter. "Hey" yelled Jupiter "Aren't they those fairy Pokemon we stole from the lakes?" You just watched in awe as the orbs of yellow, pink and blue span round faster and faster until the formed a ring of pure energy. The ring then vaulted downwards and smashed into the ground.

The dust and rubble finally cleared to reveal a glowing black and purple portal-like hole in the ground. Dialga and Palkia were gone. "Noooooo!" Roared Cyrus "What is this what has happened!?" Suddenly a large black figure with red eyes rose up from the hole and towered above you. Cyrus's frown turned into a slight smile. "So it's true..." He said quietly "There is a third Pokemon" "Master Cyrus!" Interrupted Mars "What is this? What's happened?" Ignoring her Cyrus gripped the chain with both hands before charging forwards and diving at the mysterious figure. A blinding light consumed the surroundings, engulfing your vision.

When it cleared, Cyrus and the Pokemon were gone. "W..what happened?" stammered Jupiter, gazing in astonishment at the glimmering hole in the ground. "He's gone to the distortion world!" exclaimed Cynthia "Come on" she continued, grabbing your arm "We've got to stop him" "Now look!" You pleaded, pushing her off "I'm just a wannabe trainer working on a Pokedex! I don't know anything about saving the universe." "Oh ... yeah ... I guess you're right" she sighed "This is all too much ... come on ... lets head home" Cynthia then suddenly looked up over your shoulder and smiled. "Oh look!" She lied dramatically, pointing past you "It's a Ho-oh!" "Where!?" You exclaimed, spinning round. Before you could comment you were suddenly shoved from behind. You yelped as you toppled forwards and plummeted into the portal.

"Hey Champion lady!" cried Mars "I know we're meant to be the baddies here, but YOU are one evil bi..." Cynthia jumped into the hole after you. You screamed loudly as you fell downwards for what seemed like an eternity. Then, suddenly, you toppled through another ring of light and onto a dusty sort of platform, you stumbled to your feet and gazed around at the strange world of red sandy platforms, green vines and peculiar waterfalls.

"So you followed me?" snapped a stern voice. You scrambled you your feet to see Cyrus standing on a large red rock in-front of you. "I'll have to admit, you have guts kid ... unfortunately for you they wont be of much use to you any more. In a way you are privileged to be able to witness the birth of my new..." He was interrupted by sudden roar, as a familiar figure darted overhead.

"Giratina..." Cyrus muttered "In order for the realisation of my dream, you must disappear NOW!" Suddenly Cynthia tumbled out of the portal and onto the ground. "That was rough..." she said, rising to her feet. "Now" Scowled Cyrus "As I was saying: In order for the realisation of my..." He was silenced by a second roar. The huge Pokemon swooped down and smashed into the ground, sending the three of you tumbling backwards.

"What is this?" Exclaimed Cyrus "Why are you not obeying me? I have with me the red chain! Dialga! Palkia! Come back to me!" The Giratina lunged forward, knocking him to the ground again. The red chain skidded across the ground before slipping off the edge of the platform. Cyrus gasped then crawled over to the edge peering over at the infinite drop bellow. He stood again and stared at the huge Pokemon towering over you all.

"This is not the end" He scowled "I will return, with the means of destroying this damned world. and when I do, at long last me dream will be realised!" With that, he turned and leapt back through the portal. Leaving you, Cynthia and Giratina in silence. You gazed back up at the huge Pokemon "Um I think we should go to right?" You suggested weakly. Cynthia scuffed the ground with her feet and looked at you awkwardly. "Yeah..." He said "About that..." You looked up at the motionless Pokemon that had seemed to had calmed down then back at Cynthia "What is it?" You asked

"Well, when Cyrus dived in to the portal with the red chain, he went into the portal as one with  Giratina, and then we both followed. So in theory apart from Giratina, only two people entered this world, and now one has left, to keep the balance between the two worlds only one can leave until the red chain is found" You stared at her in disbelief as she began to walk back towards the portal. "How long will that take!?" You exclaimed "Oh don't worry about that..." She replied beginning to step into the portal. "Remember time doesn't flow here, so you've got an eternity to find it" With that she winked at you before jumping through. The portal flashed the let out a strong purple light before narrowing and sealing up. You were alone...

You gazed, astonished at where the portal used to be, then at the place where the red chain had fallen. You dropped to your knees as a tear rolled down your cheek. "An eternity..." You said weakly. Suddenly you heard a whine from behind you and turned to see Giratina cocking its head to one side and looking at you, puzzled. You had almost forgotten about Giratina. The huge pokemon leaned forward and nudged you with its huge head, causing you to fall over again, jets of hot breath rushed over you, causing you to wince.

You pushed it away and continued to sob. 'It doesn't matter that time doesn't run, it would take years to find that chain' you thought. The Giratina bit lightly onto your shirt and tugged at it. "Go away!" You yelled, pushing it off. You stood up and then kicked the large red rock where the portal had been. The Giratina edged closer to you before horizontally arching its body around you to form a sort of protective loop. Between tears you looked up at the Giratina with despair. Then without warning the Pokemon craned its neck downwards and licked you, quickly, on the face.

All negative emotion suddenly seemed to leave you, this demon hell-beast, so evil it had to have its own universe, had just licked you? The Giratina did so again, the Pokemon's warm, slimy tongue made such a contrast to the cold chilling feeling you got from its presents, you seemed to warm to it. Forgetting all that had happened you reached out and gently placed a hand on its tough, golden chin. The cold surface seemed to warm at your touch and it even felt sort of ... soft? The Giratina growled softly at your touch and proceeded to lick you again. It had not had contact with humans for so long, and even when it had, the human had wanted to destroy it.

You waited for the Giratina to lean downwards again, then you suddenly reached out and hugged it, tightly around its neck. The Giratina seemed a little surprised by this sign of affection, but it wasn't complaining. It pulled you off then gently lay you back on the ground before lowering its head to ground level. You lay there on the red earth, gazing into it's eyes. It was like no other Pokemon you had seen before. The Giratina yawned suddenly giving you a front row seat to its mouth, you gazed emptily into the cavernous maw. It was about the size of the entrance to a one man tent, there were no teeth due to the golden rims of its mouth forming a sort of beak, but you could clearly see its tongue resting there, coated in a thin layer or saliva that glistened in the dim light. It seemed actually quite ... inviting?

With out giving it any thought, you suddenly reached forward and and gently placed your hand inside the Giratina's mouth. Surprised at feeling that, the Giratina closed it's mouth suddenly, not tight enough to cause you pain but enough to make you unable to free your hand. It looks at you confused but all you can do is look back, like a child just caught with their hand in the cookie jar. The Giratina then reopens its mouth again and you remove your hand. But then it didn't shut it? You put your hand on its its face, between its gleaming red eyes to show that you were free but still it held it's mouth open.

It dawned on you that perhaps it didn't oppose to you presents in it's mouth. You looked around you at the eerie formation of red rocky platforms floating into nothingness. Did you really have anything to loose? You crawled forward before gently leaning forward into the Giratina's mouth, finding no way to support your self by placing your hands on the slippery bottom to its mouth you had to lie on-top of it's tongue on your stomach. You could still feel warm jets of breath rushing over you. It was a strange feeling but it actually felt quite nice lying there, you tingled a little with anticipation. The Giratina then slowly lowered its mouth over your waist, still leaving your legs hanging out of it's mouth.

You lay there, sealed in darkness. All you could hear were the internal noises of the Legendary Pokemon's body the Giratina growled affectionately, enjoying the fleshy weight of live prey on it's tongue. Incredible, you tasted better than anything it had ever eaten. The Giratina's stomach rumbled softly. Surely there wouldn't be any harm in ... trying you would there? There would never be a connection between swallowing something and killing it would there? The Giratina gazed down at your feet hanging motionlessly out of it's mouth. You seemed to be happy. The Giratina came to a decision.

You felt the rims of the mouth tighten around your waist slightly as the Giratina raised it's head off the ground and stood up straight. The Giratina opened it's mouth a little and then tilted it's head back slightly,but you needed no invitation. You hoisted your self forward and pulled your legs inside, it was surprisingly roomy inside the mouth, and while your still had to curl up, you were quite comfortable. The Giratina lowered it's jaw again, sealing you in darkness, but it wasn't a frightening darkness, not the sort of darkness where you don't know what's around you, the soothing darkness that you get from going to bed after a long day in the field. (As in training, not farming -_-)

The Giratina then launched it's self from the platform and beat the air with it's wing-like things. It began to soar through the levitating bits of dust and rock, cradling the contense in it's mouth. You lay there, on your side, curled up inside the Pokemon's mouth. Suddenly, the Giratina tilted it's head back again causing you to slide towards the back of the Pokemon's mouth. You slid against an odd fleshy section at the back of the mouth that was a bit like a hole, but sealed up. You could hear the Giratina purr lovingly as you explored it's mouth with your hands. Just then you felt the strange hole area, presumably the entrance to the throat, slide open against your thigh. Knowing obviously that the Giratina's natural instincts were probably beginning to see you as food, you tried to push yourself away from the back of the throat, but the Pokemon's tongue cupped around your back and held you firmly in-place, knowing your legs were probably the strongest muscles in your body, you placed your feet against the back of the mouth and tried to push your self away. Being slippery with saliva, your left foot slid along the back of the mouth and got wedged in the hole.

Alarmed, you tried to use your other foot to free it, but this got stuck too. Suddenly, the entrance to the hole tensed up around your ankles, and then your felt the first ring of muscle in the throat roll over your feet, drawing you downwards. You slid a couple of inches into the Giratina's throat. Nervously you prodded on the roof of the pokemon's mouth, signalling that you wanted to come out. The Giratina ignored you and took another couple of gulps, easing you a little deeper into it's neck. It became obvious that the Giratina wasn't going to help you here so you twisted round and tried to grab onto the Pokemon's tongue, but it was a bit like trying to crush a wet bar of soap with one hand.

You could still hear it growling affectionately at the movements you made in it's mouth and you realised that the Pokemon had absolutely no intention of letting you go. You lost your grip on the Giratina's tongue entirely and continued to slide deeper into the its gullet. You reached out and grabbed onto the ridges on either side of the Giratina's mouth, these were dry and provided firm grip, which put your descent into the Pokemon's body at a complete halt. This put the Giratina in a difficult position, it could easily prize you off by slamming it's mouth shut but it didn't want to hurt you. You could feel the Giratina's snake around your torso and reach under your shirt. It then tighten in a loop around your and began to pull.

Stupidly, you let go with one hand to try and pull the tongue off. This is what the Giratina had been waiting for. Using it's tongue, it twisted you round until you were laying on your back with made your grip on the Pokemon's mouth edges loosen a lot. The Giratina felt you let go ant raised its head in delight before building up anticipation and taking a large gulp. The entrance to the throat widened allowing you to practically fall inside. You were engulfed into the envelope of warm, slimy flesh. You could feel the rings of muscle that made up the throat, contracting and relaxing, contracting and relaxing over and over again. Relentlessly pulling you deeper into the warm confines of the Legendary Pokemon's body.

The Giratina lay on it's back and shuddered, enjoying the marvellous sensation of you sliding gently down the underside of it's neck. You could hear it purr affectionately as it put one claw on it's chest to feel your struggling form, gently slide underneath. You began to hear more internal noises of the Pokemon's body, it could hear it's heart beat, and the trickling of fluids. Not to mention the exited rumbling from bellow you, the Giratina's stomach, eagerly anticipating your arrival. It wanted you inside it.

You closed your eyes as the throat seemed to get a little tighter. You could still feel the Pokemon's throat muscles gently working on your body from all sides, squeezing you gently downwards. Eventually your could feel your feet squeezed through the tight gap and into an even hotter area. The rest of your body slowly followed as you could feel your legs being eased through the tight gap. Your legs felt the other side of the stomach and had to give way. You slowly curled up as your body continued to fill the warm, pulsing sack.

Finally your shoulders and head were squeezed though and you could feel the tight gap close up after your head sealing you inside, this was a one way ticket. To your dismay the stomach wasn't as big as you'd hoped it to be and it was quite a tight fit. You curled up into a ball as the stomach contracted and relaxed around you, covering you in the stomach slimy fluids while trying to comprehend your size. Eventually, you settled and sank down partially into the bubbling soup that made up the stomachs contense. The stomach still insisted on gently massaging you, pulsating back and forth, coating your body in saliva and gastric juices.

The Giratina lay on it's side and gazed lovingly at the small bulge you made in it's stomach. Every slight movement you made was responded to by an affectionate growl. You gazed wearily into the warm darkness as the level of the hot fluid you were bathed in began to rise. Your eye lids became heavy, the pure heat and humidity combined with soothing melody of the Giratina's heart beat slowly began to send you off to sleep. The stomach let off a soft gurgle as it gently cradled you deep within the Pokemon's body.

The Giratina smiled, watching the movement in its stomach die down as it gently glided down to a mass of vegetation on one of the platforms, claimed as its nest. The Legendary pokemon curled up and smiled licking the last of your taste from its lips before yawning. It curled up amounts the soft bowl of plants and rested its head gently on the bulge in its stomach. The Giratina would let you out in a couple of days time, not only that but it would return you to the real world, you would wake to find your self in Floaroma meadow with the sun on your face, not know what had happened. But for now ... you slept, and dreamed.
Hi everyone,

This isn't a massive comeback but my parents are both out, so I've found a little time to get online and post what I've been doing recently. Although I'm still not sure when I'll properly be back online.

You've probably already read it but I've only just completed this part on Platinum and thought I'd write something on it.

I spent a while on this one so a critique would really be appreciated, as my membership will probably run out before I get back.

Thanks again for your patience everyone ^^;

P.S.

Allen: Happy (late) birthday I'm sorry I wasn't around, I'll get you something when I get back.

Spikey220: Please check your emails :facepalm:
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is amazing ^.^ The storyline sucked me in and kept me entertained ^w^ The grammar may not be great but for me the storyline is all that matters. And this is probably a new personal favorite of mine ^w^ you did a wonderful wonderful job ^.^ (Now I just need more words ._. uhhhh.. Purple frog spatulas are teaming up with the evil flying pies to take over the world using pineapples, coconuts, strawberries, and hippopotamuses. A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z There I got it now)